Book 1
I love it. I love Luna already, seems like she's gonna be a handful😩🤭
Love it ♥
I think there's a part missing in chapter 10, after it says "he's the fourth in command"
I took that part out and addressed it earlier in the chapter.
I missed Luna & Onyx so much
I had literally just read the chapters you posted on Inkitt, and the comparison is phenomenal! Super impressed with how polished it feels now 👏👏👏
Thank you!! I have some plot holes to fill that readers might have missed. I think of the other versions as rough drafts and these will be made for physical copies one day, I hope. One day at a time!
You seem to be taking all the right steps to get to being a published author at some point. Keeping my fingers crossed for you 🤞🤞🤞
Avaluna at her finest 👌👌
Landon ❤️ so cute
I love it. I love Luna already, seems like she's gonna be a handful😩🤭
Love it ♥
I think there's a part missing in chapter 10, after it says "he's the fourth in command"
I took that part out and addressed it earlier in the chapter.
I missed Luna & Onyx so much
I had literally just read the chapters you posted on Inkitt, and the comparison is phenomenal! Super impressed with how polished it feels now 👏👏👏
Thank you!! I have some plot holes to fill that readers might have missed. I think of the other versions as rough drafts and these will be made for physical copies one day, I hope. One day at a time!
You seem to be taking all the right steps to get to being a published author at some point. Keeping my fingers crossed for you 🤞🤞🤞
Avaluna at her finest 👌👌
Landon ❤️ so cute